You got the comic timing perfect! I wonder if maybe some background music would have added to the effect. You know, like a department store track. Something deliberately awkward sounding.
A wonderfully styled project. Oozing with charm and creative flair at every frame. Carefully planned, at every moment, to procure the intended emotion - and done with real effectiveness. Drawing from some magnificently talented voice actors (please tell me that you've seen TOME!!), and heralded with a memorable musical theme to boot... I'll have it stuck in my head for days!
In a nutshell, perfect. What incredible talent!
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